Adam is a taller kid. He is thin and has brown hair. When he was on Okinawa he got skinnier because they didn’t eat a lot .then he got wounded and had to use crouches and a cane. His leg will never look the same.
Emotionally he in the beginning he is headstrong and confident. then he joins the war and becomes paranoid and nerves when he gets home from the war he is still paranoid. He even looks for shelter when he first enters a new room. And if he here’s a loud noise he ducks for cover
You could use some more figurative language.
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