journal

fulfilled
authors note: this is a short response to thank you ma'ma

I think that she fulfilled  her purpose in life witch was really nothing and died a gruesome death being robed by the same kid later that week  even though she tried to change him and gave him the 10 dollars for them suede shoes. he will stay in his life of crime and eventually get killed with his bad girl friend in a cop shoot out. his son will not go to his funeral but he will go to luella funeral to pay his respects.

Trying to be modern

      Authors note: this is a short response for the story Dead Man’s Path

The main conflict in this story is the path that runs through the school it starts a war between the village and the school. The school puts barbed wire on a fence so the villagers can’t go through the path. When one of the kids from the village dies they make a sacrifice to please their ancestors. So they won’t take any more kids from the village they take down one of the buildings of the school and tare up the garden that the head masters wife planted. The village priest says that the road runs to the ancient burial ground and the birth place of the children. The head master is not going to budge on the subject as the village priest is leaving the head master says can you make the path around the school he kids will help make the new path the man does not respond. At the end the school administrator came and did not approve of the  school.